That wasn't that bad. The only problem I saw (well.. heard) with it was the sound seemed really random and didn't fit each situation. To improve you should find some accurate sounds.
Good job anyway.
Great effort, although there are a couple of problems. Firstly, I don't think the binoculars were 'big enough' when you had the screen looking inside them. That kind of ruined the feeling. Secondly, it was a bit short and the story was kinda.. bad. :P
Good luck on your next movie.
Lol I love this
I'm addicted to this scary corny flash! XD Good job.
Haha :D How cool of you to like it! :D
Thanks for the review!
I didn't get it.. :|
Looks like you just copied the style of an animation I've seen recently. And hell, you could never get 10 layers with that crappy background. The animation was slow, choppy, boring, no sound effects. Also, maybe you should not browse this website illegally under 13. You're just embarrassing yourself. I'm so surprised this even got through.
you cannot review me like this.Look at your flash.looks like it was drawn in paint.bah.Look at your ass.
That was really nice.
It touched me. And the menu music brings me back good memories. Thanks for sharing this with us. :)
It sucked.Stick training sticks.Create something creative that creates a better creation of creations that mix up a crater of crates full of creative and different words.
Lol, seriously? Learn how to write sentences properly, and maybe don't do something so sad. Dude, my little brother is better at flash, and he is nine years old. :/
Anyway, I don't usually write long nasty reviews, but this flash was so lame I .. I just couldn't resist. :|
You don't understand.That is a FUN sentence,not a NORMAL sentence.Go to hell
Lmao! That was awesome!...
..For some apparant reason.. O_o
Is that made to be CREEPY or something!?
Kinda looked too much like DBZ, but the movie it'self could change all that.. :|
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.